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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by OAKY SLAVE on December 29th 2016, 9:36 pm

there is nothing ironic about that statement what the hell is your problem

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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Flammarcos on December 29th 2016, 9:36 pm

send me your favorite three examples of why it was bad, rt
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Tyson on December 29th 2016, 9:36 pm

Flamcastro wrote:
FUDGIEFIGHTERIA wrote:
Tyson wrote:fd quit shitposting and go back to writing your book damn
for real though if he spent as much time and put as much effort into working on his book as he did arguing with people on the internet and trying to spite me he might actually have a decent rough draft publishers wouldn't immediately reject by now
this takes minutes
bro minutes add up, enough to go for a bike ride with your milf.
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by professional crybaby on December 29th 2016, 9:37 pm

that feel when FD has to make excuses for not listening to my criticisms lmfao it's your book and rep on the line fam not mine
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Flammarcos on December 29th 2016, 9:37 pm

porter ricer pulverizer wrote:there is nothing ironic about that statement what the hell is your problem
oh so you're just unironically being a complete waste of space who's spiteful and rude to people for no reason got it thanks for confirming all of my suspicions with one post
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Post by professional crybaby on December 29th 2016, 9:38 pm

Flamcastro wrote:send me your favorite three examples of why it was bad, rt
i would but you asshurt removed my permissions from the document lol
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Post by Ugly on December 29th 2016, 9:38 pm

prob has 2 do wit da constant jerking off
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Flammarcos on December 29th 2016, 9:38 pm

FUDGIEFIGHTERIA wrote:that feel when FD has to make excuses for not listening to my criticisms lmfao it's your book and rep on the line fam not mine
you know dude i'm working on my submission right now you sure this is the hill you want laura rennert's email to spear you on a month at most from now
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Post by Flammarcos on December 29th 2016, 9:38 pm

you know if there were such glaring and recurring flaws with it you'd be able to remember them
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Post by professional crybaby on December 29th 2016, 9:39 pm

just from memory though your pacing is fucking atrocious, you have no understanding of how to actually show the viewer instead of spitting half a million lines of exposition at them, and above all your word choice is just straight up terrible and reads like a god damn dictionary
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by professional crybaby on December 29th 2016, 9:40 pm

Flamcastro wrote:you know if there were such glaring and recurring flaws with it you'd be able to remember them
that isn't how the human memory works bud
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by OAKY SLAVE on December 29th 2016, 9:40 pm

Flamcastro wrote:
porter ricer pulverizer wrote:there is nothing ironic about that statement what the hell is your problem
oh so you're just unironically being a complete waste of space who's spiteful and rude to people for no reason got it thanks for confirming all of my suspicions with one post

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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by OAKY SLAVE on December 29th 2016, 9:40 pm

"no reason"
you dumber than i thought, damn

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Post by Flammarcos on December 29th 2016, 9:42 pm

so i went and dug it up and you read literally 5 pages of it my dude and the best criticism that's still relevant you had in there was your spergrage about me "spoiling" even less than what's going to be on the back of the book
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Post by professional crybaby on December 29th 2016, 9:43 pm

Flamcastro wrote:so i went and dug it up and you read literally 5 pages of it my dude and the best criticism that's still relevant you had in there was your spergrage about me "spoiling" even less than what's going to be on the back of the book
wew famalam still not taking muh criticisms cuz you're butthurt af check your blood pressure and take a fifteen minute walk
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Flammarcos on December 29th 2016, 9:46 pm

[quote="FUDGIEFIGHTERIA"]
just from memory though your pacing is fucking atrocious,
been old news for a while now and once again you read 5 pages
you have no understanding of how to actually show the viewer instead of spitting half a million lines of exposition at them,
t. read literally 5 pages and doesn't understand flow
and above all your word choice is just straight up terrible and reads like a god damn dictionary
t. doesn't understand matter-of-fact tones designed to add fantasy motif to a space opera, or big words (that people actually understand preferably) used to avoid repetition

porter ricer pulverizer wrote:"no reason"
you dumber than i thought, damn
yeah telling people they're not worth taking seriously is something you will very rarely have a good reason to do
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Flammarcos on December 29th 2016, 9:47 pm

FUDGIEFIGHTERIA wrote:
Flamcastro wrote:so i went and dug it up and you read literally 5 pages of it my dude and the best criticism that's still relevant you had in there was your spergrage about me "spoiling" even less than what's going to be on the back of the book
wew famalam still not taking muh criticisms cuz you're butthurt af check your blood pressure and take a fifteen minute walk
i know "baseless spergrage not grounded in reality or patterns shown in the past" when i see it because it does in fact take one to really know one
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Post by professional crybaby on December 29th 2016, 9:48 pm

all these excuses for not taking my criticisms check that blood pressure seriously amigo
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Flammarcos on December 29th 2016, 9:49 pm

or, you know, maybe,

just maybe,

just for once in your life, possibly,



you weren't right
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Ugly on December 29th 2016, 9:50 pm

bahamut or tiamat who will win
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by OAKY SLAVE on December 29th 2016, 9:50 pm

Ugly wrote:bahamut or tiamat who will win
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Tyson on December 29th 2016, 9:51 pm

Flamcastro wrote:
porter ricer pulverizer wrote:"no reason"
you dumber than i thought, damn
yeah telling people they're not worth taking seriously is something you will very rarely have a good reason to do
damn fd taking everything you read on the internet to heart fucking crybaby wahhhh
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by professional crybaby on December 29th 2016, 9:51 pm

Flamcastro wrote:or, you know, maybe,

just maybe,

just for once in your life, possibly,



you weren't right
check that blood pressure
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Mac B on December 29th 2016, 9:52 pm

Ugly wrote:bahamut or tiamat who will win
tiamat shes the mother of monsters brudder
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Re: let's hear it for our boys in blue

Post by Ugly on December 29th 2016, 9:52 pm

op is bahamut
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