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i write things on occasion

Post by zach on April 6th 2015, 10:33 pm

Suspended animation, freely allowed to walk as he chooses but decides to stay dormant and static. He's the spectator. He wants none of the glamour and superficial form of commercialized happiness served in dishes at a 5 star restaurant or test-drivable at a luxury car lot. Perception of what the world is, a bunch of nothing, you're expendable, i'm expendable, nothing that happens to us we can control or matters. He'd rather not be on his ninth-inning, alone, old, retired, when absolutely no one gives a fuck about you and everyone that did died. He accepts fate with open arms, to some seemingly masochistic as if wanting a death-wish. He knows the ineviable, we start, we finish, everything we do in between that is a blur lost in time in an era old men like to blabber about to their uncaring grandchildren.

1st paragraph. if you don't think it's utter shit, i'll post the rest.

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Post by alyaza on April 7th 2015, 4:45 am

pretty pretentious and you need to chill with the vocab
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Post by toby on April 7th 2015, 3:30 pm

it is kinda pretentious but post the rest anyway
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Post by James on April 7th 2015, 4:31 pm

I don't even know what could have produced this.

A fiend, probably.
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Post by george_lopez_1992 on April 7th 2015, 5:13 pm

Planetar wrote:I don't even know what could have produced this.

A fiend, probably.
your signature is pretty interesting

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